Suggestions From Dani, Peer Review Comments, & Plans to Edit: Organize paragraphs so that they are grouped more together by the topic I had my second paragraph about natural systems and then another paragraph about it later in the paper; I could put these two paragraphs not necessarily “together” but at least group them so I am not repeating myself later in the paper Introduce all of my sources in the introduction so the reader has an idea of what…
The Dalai Lama is not talking about the sciences themselves, but more as the implications of what could happen E.g. the atomic bomb had a slight chance of cracking the planet in half but the scientists still chose to go ahead and test the bomb anyways The urgent problems that the Dalai Lama talks about are so complex that it is hard to predict the outcomes of what possibly could happen. In order to predict these things, they would require…
One thing that was really surprising was that originally, the concept behind children going to school around Labor Day and ending in June was due to freeing up children’s labor when it was needed most on the farm. Though this is just a simple fact, it just shows what has been lost throughout the years as Kingsolver discusses; something that I have been taking part of for around 13 years now I had no idea about. Another surprising thing about…
I agree with Bittman when he says “the time has come to stop raising [animals] industrially and stop eating them thoughtlessly”. This is because I feel as though if we keep eating the way that we do, we will run out of livestock for us to even eat, which provide essential nutrients for us. Though they have nutrients we need, we do not need to eat nearly as much as we actually do. I personally am disgusted with how animals…
